Tuesday, September 21, 2010

I can't

I can't hear when the pieces are falling
When your armor is flaking
Your skin separating,
the blood that won't clot.
The stage in your skull
Your audience waiting
When the lines aren't coming
as your theater burns.

2 comments:

  1. For what it's worth, I like the third line down and the third line up best.

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  2. Very cool image :) and the ending is fantastic!

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